(english test)

[Bizz]

because you always Read my post you saw what Error I do

I will done My last English exam Tomorow
I completed my oral 85% my lisang 94%

but tomorow It is my Wirthing Exam !

It is a pretest I did today... 150 words text...
supjet Newspaper;concert you have been to
it is what I wirhted....
I went to the last cocert of Quovadis the group is metal style performer. all members of the group are from montreal city , and they make shows evry where in North America.

I saw them in theier last show at the medly in montreal. they gave us two hours Of speedy And powerfull music.

Few moment in the show the group gave Good surprises like: they intited a signer of another metal group Called "annonimus".

Is it Corec?
and I have no idea for the rest...

[Ned]

I went to the last cocert of Quovadis the group is metal style performer. all members of the group are from montreal city , and they make shows evry where in North America.

I saw them in theier last show at the medly in montreal. they gave us two hours Of speedy And powerfull music.

Few moment in the show the group gave Good surprises like: they intited a signer of another metal group Called "annonimus".
Is it Corec?
and I have no idea for the rest...
Here's my version:
I went to Quovadis' last concert, a rock/metal band. All band members are from Montreal (City), and they are performing everywhere in North America.
I saw them in their last show at the Medley (?) in Montreal. They gave us two hours of speedy and powerful music.
A few moments in the show, the group surprised us furthermore when they invited a singer from another group called "Annonymous".
(City) - this element can be absent, meaning that you can say only the name of the city without including the word city after it.
(?) - is this the word you wanted to type? Medley? 'Cause I'm not sure.

[Bizz]

Medly is a name of a place

[Ned]

Yes, I figured it out, but is is Medly or Medley? Which one is correct?

[PayBays]

because you always Read my post you saw what Error I do

I will done My last English exam Tomorow
I completed my oral 85% my lisang 94%

but tomorow It is my Wirthing Exam !

It is a pretest I did today... 150 words text...
supjet Newspaper;concert you have been to
it is what I wirhted....
I went to the last cocert of Quovadis the group is metal style performer. all members of the group are from montreal city , and they make shows evry where in North America.

I saw them in theier last show at the medly in montreal. they gave us two hours Of speedy And powerfull music.

Few moment in the show the group gave Good surprises like: they intited a signer of another metal group Called "annonimus".

Is it Corec?
and I have no idea for the rest...

About Medly,if you read the sentence properly you can see it's the place where the show will be held in the city

[Ned]

That I can see. But I saw this word before and I was curious (because I saw it written as Medley not Medly) which one is correct.

[tern]

I went to the last cocert of Quovadis the group is metal style performer. all members of the group are from montreal city , and they make shows evry where in North America.

I saw them in theier last show at the medly in montreal. they gave us two hours Of speedy And powerfull music.

Few moment in the show the group gave Good surprises like: they intited a signer of another metal group Called "annonimus".


I went to the last concert of Quovadis, a metal-style band. All members of the group are from the city of Montreal. They do shows everywhere in North America.

I saw them in their last show at the "Medley" music hall in Montreal. The gave us two hours of speedy and powerful music.

There were a few moments in the show that gave us good surprises. One is they invited a singer of another metal group called "Annonimus" onto the stage with them.

I tried to rewrite it a bit to make more sense and be better spelled but still use simple words that you have probably learned. Good luck Bizz!

[PayBays]

It's fixed

I searched on Google on Medley Montreal and it's a theater

[Bizz]

oupss it is Medley
it is the name of the place

But thank you all you really help me

I have a lot of work to day

my buy food...
The honda Crx...
Many phone for have the damn other head for the impac gun for unbote the damn cardans.....ext ext

the exam tomorow will be hard....

[tern]

I am afraid if you use good English your teacher will know you have cheated Bizz. Be careful!

[Nestonia]

I am afraid if you use good English your teacher will know you have cheated Bizz. Be careful!

depends which kind of teacher he has

[Bizz]

Here's my version:
I went to Quovadis' last concert, a rock/metal band. All band members are from Montreal (City), and they are performing everywhere in North America.
I saw them in their last show at the Medley (?) in Montreal. They gave us two hours of speedy and powerful music.
A few moments in the show, the group surprised us furthermore when they invited a singer from another group called "Annonymous".

that is good

But do you have another idea for the rest ....

anything I only want 150 words....

[Bizz]

thank you all the big part of my work is finish

I can do the rest by my self

[Ned]

that is good

But do you have another idea for the rest ....

anything I only want 150 words....
Oh you mean you want to dilate upon this text. Well, that is your turn to do. You only need a little imagination and some help from us, and the text is ready. :cheesy:

[Bizz]

Ok I did my final Test

All are fine 8)