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Quentin
25th July 2005, 21:30
She walked with a cool collected calm that only the finest of prowlers could master. Unsuspecting patrons walked pasted her from oncoming and from behind. She was masterful in deception, the thought of anyone out witting her was beyond anyone's imagination. For her work was always signified by the mark. A black dagger left on the scene. The police could never figure out who she was, they were always 3 steps behind... except this one. He was also one of the force's best detectives. Why take him here? Why now? He was the closest person to ever find her trail. After all, not everyone is completely invisible. Part of covert opts was to eliminate loose ends and she had to tie this one up. He didn't even know she was stalking him. It was a cement jungle, he was the prey, and she was the predator moving in for the kill. Her timing, disciplined and calculated, as always... was perfect.

A commotion stirred his attention and he looked away from her. A street hoodlum had stolen a purse from a citizen, ran in to a patrol officer. It was a crowded street and not much movement was gained during these lunchtime endeavors. Like the hairs on the back of the great panther, she poised herself for the kill… ready to pounce.

Johnathan Lee turned into the most beautiful of women he'd ever seen. So captivated by her charming yet wicked smile, he didn't even register the hot sensation against his chest. It was warm against her face. As the blade slipped unnoticed through his ribcage, he felt the euphoria of beauty wash over him, her beauty and he welcomed it. Someone shoved him away, and he became dizzy. Before he realized that his favorite white shirt had become wine red, she was gone. John looked back and forth, someone screamed, and he lost it. The woman... where is she, will she come back? These were the last thoughts racing through his mind before he slipped into the cold darkness.

The hunter walked away without even being seen. Falling from her gloved hand was the glinting dull flash, from a black dagger.

+ + +

The detective arrived on the scene to access the death of his partner. There was the usual yellow, do not cross tape surrounding his partner's form. Police were moving people away from the area and news crews were told to back away until later. Clicks and flashes of cameras brought the detective from his thoughts. He wasn't sure why Lee's assassin would strike out in the middle of daylight, when the streets were bustling with hundreds of eye witnesses, either she became more careless in her vendetta against Lee or she was sending a message. He figured that it was the ladder... that had to be it. When dealing with someone that has eluded the law for years, Barns would not put it past that dangerous assassin. Another officer came about to yield a knife in a bag labeled evidence. Sure enough it was a black dagger, and tests would yield Lee's blood on the blade he was for sure. And he was sure that the knife would not have any traces of DNA or prints. She was precise, thorough and clean. That scared Lee and Barns shared the same sentiments.

"I knew he was too close." the detective speculated. He spoke more to himself than to the officer. "There wasn't anything else..." the other offered. "Of course not... she is elusive to say the least."
Detective Barns concluded. Detective Barns walked around and chatted with witnesses, no good leads. They all were too pre-absorbed in their own business to even notice someone being stabbed. How pathetic he thought. It occurred to him that he might better probe for information from a homeless bum. He looked about and noticed a man half sleeping in the ally adjacent to where is partner now lay. The man smelled of putrid beer. Dirt caked his cheeks and the clothes he wore looked as if they were from a prehistoric cave of garbage. The long and matted beard he bore had flies clinging to crumbs of food that were decorating his mane like ornaments on a Christmas tree. Barns was not particularly interested in interviewing him here, so he decided to arrest the man for drunk in public charges. He was sure that it would not be the first time. He turned to grab the closest patrol officer on the scene but instead found himself staring at the most beautiful girl he'd ever seen in is life. She was wearing a black trench coat with thigh high boots that barely met the short tight skirt that squeezed her waist. Her top was slim and barely cupped the woman’s well defined bosoms. Her hair was jet black and it flowed from her face rather smoothly in the wind. She was standing tall despite her short stature. He could not turn away... he felt as if he did, the world would end. She slowly turned to him letting her eyes wander until she met his. Their gazes locked and he could feel himself warming up. felt his trousers move. She was a goddess. Her smile broke off his mesmerized glare and was instantly replaced by his stark embarrassment. He turned to offer her some decency and when he turned back she was gone. He rushed to the curb and looked up and down the street, but she was lost in a blanket of people covering the sidewalk. Barns wondered if he'd ever have the fortunes of seeing her again... probably not. His pessimism overruled any shred of hope stirring from his most recent fantasies. Enough playing around Barns, he thought... I have to interview this witness.

Later that day, Barns interviewed the bum and found that he had been sleeping for most of the day. A lot of good that did, just then, his phone rang. Barns got a dreadful sensation at that moment, and thought that if he picked up the phone, he would run into more misery. Sure enough, the call was his wife. She had managed to track him down primarily to nag at him for not doing as she asked. The other detectives knew this routine and merely felt for the guy. They snickered at him for always replying... yes dear, and I know dear. This was usually followed by a; it won’t happen again dear... I know... I mean it this time. Anything to get her off the phone, but then, this time it was a little different.

"You have a package here for you, when are you coming to get it? Can you bring me some fresh tomatoes for supper? And while you are at it, pick up some milk... we are out of milk... are you there Ted? Oh... and we are out of dish soap." It was a wind that would never and... All Ted Barns could say was, "I'm on it."

"Who is this package from Ted? Are you seeing someone? Its smells like a woman? You better not be cheating on me!!" Ted hung up the phone.

It didn't even hit him until he was getting up to clock out for the day when he realized that he had a package that smelled like a woman in his wife’s' hands. What was that all about? With more haste than flies on shit, he gathered his briefcase and grabbed his keys, left the office and ran to his car. This was getting spooky and he needed to get to the bottom of things.

+ + +

She watched him exit the police station... He was in a hurry and she thought that he'd gotten the news. Sure enough, as she followed him, she knew already where he was headed. Men are so weak... she thought. With a hint of a smile creeping across her lips, she kind of laughed, like a little school girl giggling at the boy in the sandbox. This wasn't going to be hard at all.

+ + +

He went right home as expected. When he got in, he was immediately assaulted by a woman bearing curses and threats. He ignored them and demanded the package. His wife handed the rather large, somewhat heavy box to him. He carried it over to the living room and checked the label. It was addressed to him and the paper used was pink. Pink? How odd... It smelled of perfume. He was afraid and he thought that it was something that got mixed up with someone else that had his name. It wasn't uncommon these days to receive packages addressed to you, that clearly wasn't meant for you. The mail system sucked.

"Can you get my knife dear?" He insisted. "What is it?" She replied. "Get my knife!" he yelled. She cringed in response and moved over to the bedroom where he kept his 'toys' all the while mumbling to herself.

He looked up and notices a SUV parked across the street. One he'd never seen before. The windows were tinted dark as midnight. It was running he knew.. the hot exhaust clashed with the cold winter air. It was spewing steam like a train. It was a cop's job to notice things unusual and he'd never seem it there before. Call it paranoia, but he thought he'd better check it out. Barns moved to the door and before he opened it, he checked his firearm. Loaded, good. He holstered the Glock and opened the door. Barns immediately noticed that the SUV had no plates. Walking towards the truck wasn't hard at all. But Barns didn't want to alarm the occupant. He pretended to grab the morning paper that his wife always forgot the get for him. It was close enough to the street to put him in a better position.

The vehicle was clean, black and sleek. It said to him that 'I am pristine' He thought of getting one himself. But the wife would never go for it. He bent down to grab the paper and.... BAM!!!!!!! The next thing he realized was flight. Barns was thrown across the street from the blast coming from his home. He fell into a roll and looked back at his house only to see it in flames. Shattered glass littered the lawn and the street. He felt pain in his back. He could not hear anything because his ear drums were ringing. Broken wood and shingle started to fall to the ground. He leaned and rolled trying to get his balance. No use. What the fuck happened he thought? His mind was racing... he had to get in there and save his wife. He watched as the door to the SUV opened and he could see soft smooth legs emerge from the darkness within. He watched as the black leather 2 inch heels that adorned the smooth legs met the ground. It was graceful. His gaze started to rise and he recognized her! It was her! He knew it! She was it, the assassin. He reached for his gun but found instead forlorn emptiness. She walked closer. He looked to his left and found the Glock. It was out of reach.

He tried to get up, but he was assaulted by pain in his back. She came closer. He rolled over to see his attacker. It was the most magnificent thing he'd ever seen. Her beauty seemed to calm him. It was like a mother, settling a baby. She had an aura about her that engulfed him. He steadied his breath waiting for the killing blow. But it never fell. She just stood over him and watched. Her dark eyes piercing him, reading his thoughts, then she bent low to get closer to him and he didn't resist. She smelled so good. Her hair was long and black just as before. It brushed his arm and it made him tingle. She smiled at him and moved her hand to his cheek. Oh the warmth! She was maternal ecstasy and he found himself wanting more. Who was this mysterious woman!? The soft caress of her fingers penetrated his soul; it gave him something... peace. He felt peace. She was the harbinger of death and yet at the same time, his spiritual peacekeeper. He fell then, into darkness. He could feel her there still and for some reason wasn't worried. All he could do was smile as he slipped away. In the last moments of his thought, he felt her leave him. NOOOO!! He wanted to scream! Nothing came out. He felt the cold then and it stretched out to his soul, taking it. He tried to resist but he didn't have the energy. Barns fell away into what he thought was hell, his peace taken from him, and the scent of god leaving his presence was more than he could bare. The betrayal was complete when Barns knew no more.

+ + +

She stood then, leaving the knife in Barns' neck. She glanced around and noticed people peering at her. She looked to the gun on the ground and belt low to pick it up. The neighbor across the street was a older man in his sixties, probably a good time for him she thought. She moved as fast as lightning towards the man. He stood there frozen in time. Her graceful stride was matched only by her acute keen accuracy. Three rounds went off and the man, gasping for breath moved his hand up to a tight group of holes in his chest. He tried to stop the blood from flowing freely but he didn't have the energy to continue the movement. He felt the air rushing past his face... watched as the ground slammed into him. She dropped the pistol on the ground next to the fallen man. She then glanced at the rest of the people watching her. They all started to move inside and as each one vanished from the outside world, she would stare at the next one until they were all gone. Satisfied that they got the message, she got in the Chevy Tahoe and sped off. That didn't go as well as she thought.

+ + +

In the foggy memory of her dreams, Alizee could hear the screams, they echoed through the room with a ferocious will. She was being assailed with the torment carried in the voices. One of the men hit her and she felt the warm trickle of blood go down her face right before it went numb from the impact. Her face swollen, she passed out with the onslaught of pain wracking her brain.

Every night she had these dreams, they always woke her in a cold sweat. Completely dazed by the searing memory of her childhood, Alizee felt the tightening of her throat. Felt the pain from last night’s dream well up within her. She put her head in her hands and began to weep. The tears flowed with out resistance. She would let it come. Welcoming it in its entirety, it was a ritual for her. However painful it is, she’d never forget what had happened so long ago. Some say that crying is a way of cleansing the soul she remembered. For her though, it was a constant reminder of dread that had followed her through the years. Just barely 20, it seemed that she had lived more than 100 years compared to others. It wasn’t always like this. Alizee forced happier thoughts of her life forward. She tried to grasp hope that one day things would be better. That she can find the love that was stolen from her.

“Time to go to work again” she said aloud. More to herself than the empty walls that encased her existence.

She stood. Her bare form being accentuated by the yellow glare from the room’s only window. Sweat was glistening off her back and neck. Gathering up a bathrobe, she put it on and walked into the kitchen where she would continue her morning ritual of coffee and a smoke. How she had fallen she thought. Not even finishing the cigarette, or even putting it out for that matter, she walked back into her room and sat at a desk. Not much else decorated the room, just a bed, her desk, a few pieces of luggage and an ammo box. In front of her on the wall just above the laptop she used, was news clipping and pictures of people. Military people from years ago, the age of the clippings and printouts were clearly marked on the headlines. Some of the pictures had ‘exes’ through them. She picked up a marker and crossed out 2 more. There were only seven more to go. Alizee powered up her computer and entered in a password. The computer started up and she opened a browser. A few quick searches revealed another person. And yes, he resembled the pictures of the ones on the wall. This one had an address attached to it though. She wrote it down and pinned it to the wall next to the picture.

A little over two weeks had passed since her last visit to the states. She would have to plan ahead this time. She was getting the idea that someone was catching on to her movements. Though they have not openly pursued her like the cops did, but she was aware of them. She knew they had noticed her. It didn’t matter, she was almost done and when it was all over she would find a small hole and crawl under it to escape the dreams.

She started to pack a lead lined box. It was large, large enough to fit a dismantled rifle in. She then proceeded to close the box; she sealed it and attached a label to it. Stripping herself of the robe, she walked into the bathroom and turned on the shower. In a few minutes the steam would fog up the window and mirror. Not a big deal, she wasn’t concerned with looks, didn’t even care about make up or any of the girly things most her age would trouble themselves with.

The water slid smoothly down her bare skin. It felt good to her and she always spent a few extra minutes in the shower than most. Sometimes she’d even run the hot water all the way out. She glanced over to the pistol in the shower. It was a USP45, American made and hard to come by in France. Regardless it was a finely machined gun, very reliable and most importantly, it was loaded. A knock at the door startled her. She never had visitors, and she grabbed the gun, not even bothering to cover herself up, she’d moved to the door and stood to the side of it, back against the wall. She cocked her ear toward the door and listened for anything that would give away her visitor. Click, she removed the safety from the gun.

“Holà, Ali, tu es là?” she heard a girl’s voice proclaim. She relaxed and replied “Holà…”

Alizee moved to the bathroom and grabbed the robe and put it on. This was going to be a good day.

+ + +

After spending the day with Trystine who was just a tender and fragile age of 12 years old, the girl from a small village a few miles away that had befriended her. Alizee booked a flight to New York 3 weeks in advance. Her plan was to ship the rifle to an address she had reserved on an apartment in some small town in Massachusetts. She stopped for a minute to smile at Trystine. She and Tryst, as she liked to be called, had spent the day talking and laughing at stupid jokes while picking strawberries in the countryside. Alizee owned a rather large estate in the hills in southern France. She had inherited the plot when her parents died. She didn't care to remember any of it, as it would always bring those horrible dreams. But spending time with Tryst, she would forget about the horrors she'd faced and instead the feelings would be replaced by a childhood she'd never had. It was refreshing to her to spend time with such an innocent soul. Tryst was the only other person she had loved, as a little sister figure that she never had, Alizee could bond with her and talk about childish things.

As such, today's conversation was about love and family. Her recollections of her family were sub planted by the little girl's memories, which were more refreshing than Ali's. Sometimes she'd wished that she and Tryst could just go someplace else and be a family of their own. Alizee's retribution would not allow that, would demand justice and so as it was, she'd continue on the course of actions that would place her next to her target, a town mayor that resided in the states. Lately she'd been traveling there a few times a year, carefully picking the stage for her next mark. She had learned all that she needed when she shacked up with a legionnaire fanatic. He was a rebellious, cocky and more importantly well trained special ops soldier for the army of France. They would go out to the countryside and practice sniping targets at 600 meters. She'd convinced him to teach her close quarter combat, military covert tactics and espionage. She was into it. At the time she was filled with hate and regret. Later when he was serving a tour, she'd gotten word that he'd been KIA. Once she heard that she raided his weapon cache and most of his notes. That was just a little over 3 years to date.

+ + +

Special Agent Jim Manone was assigned to unusual homicides in the cases that crossed interstate lines. His primary assignments involved mainly serial killers. Most of the victims of killers had something in common such as gender, or color, sometimes even underlying points of interest like maybe locations or names. The more radical ones usually followed some biblical prophecy or some stupid nonsense like that. So when the black dagger case landed on his desk with out a parachute, he was rather confused. His senior field agent in charge insisted that he take this case. No background what so ever on any of the 5 deaths. No information on the killer other than he’d always left a black serrated knife on the scene, usually in the body. Basically all he really got was six pieces of paper in a manila folder labeled ‘black dagger assassin’. He started to cross reference the 5 stiffs in the folder but nothing unusual came up. 2 cops that were partners, 1 retired commercial helicopter pilot, 1 disabled man in a nursing home, and the last was a medical surgeon for Chicago’s finest. None of them were related to each other. His phone rang and Jim paused to pick it up.

“This is Agent Manone, can I help you?” he answered. “Yes, this is forensics… I think we have something.” The female voice replied. “I’ll be right down” Jim concluded.

Man she was a hot one. Jim always loved listening to her voice on the phone. Sometimes he would even have forensics re run tests when she was on shift. The FBI always had hired good looking people and he’d never complained. One of these days he thought, one of these days she is going to give it up. He smiled. When Manone entered the lab, he was greeted by a rather attractive red head. Her hair was tied on a bun atop her head. Under her while lab coat she wore slim causal slacks. Jim could see her pelvic bones on her hips being softly accentuated by the pants she wore. Her blouse was neatly ironed and it spoke of someone that was matriculate and disciplined. It was topped off with a low cut ‘V’ neck that was adorned with 3 buttons. The top one was undone. He licked his lips. Despite her thin wired reading glasses, Vanessa still looked stunning with even toned skin that brought out her deep hued hair. She had faint freckles dotting her cheeks, and he thought they were just the cutest things.

“Jim!” he’d heard her declare. “Oh… sorry, I was distracted.” Jim managed to spurt out. “Yeah, I bet…” She trailed off.

Vanessa walked over to a dish that contained some metal fragments. The lab was neatly cleaned and there were different types of machines with magnifiers and telescopic devices. X-Ray scans occupied the walls and in her area he saw some of the names. They were his victims’ names.

“So… what did you find?” he prompted.

Vanessa shifted through some paperwork and pulled one out. “This is the lab report on these fragments here.” She paused. “They surgeon removed these from one of your victims.”

“Fragments…? Like pieces of metal, fragments?” Jim questioned. “Yeah… The compounds in these fragments are made of your typical steel, but there are traces of explosive material.” She went on “Like from a grenade…”

“But none of these people were in the military, I checked that.” The denial was clearly written on his face. “I’m telling you this man has seen combat.” Vanessa stated rather bluntly. “And you need to check again.”

“Sometimes someone’s body can say more about them in death than records can say about their lives.” She hinted. “Look, this victim over here, was shot 3 times...” She was getting really excited now. “These men had been in the military. And I bet if you talk to someone in DC, they might come up with some purged records, classified documents, or something.”

Jim took this all in and started to think about the possibility that these men were part of some shadow unit. He’d heard about them before, through stories back in basic training. But the military never confirmed that they even existed. Now it seems that he might have to uncover something that the government meant to hide. The problem was that, the members of these shadow units never existed. Nothing, from their recruitment to their retirement was ever documented. Either he’d have to find someone that would confess, or he’d have to take the case to the trash can.

+ + +

“This is the captain speaking… we are about to land at J.F.K airport. The local time is 7:05pm. Our current weather is 55 degrees, a little chilly for the early autumn visitors. I hope you have enjoyed your flight, and please fasten your seatbelts. Thank you for Flying TED.” The Flight sounds system chirped.

Another visit to the states she thought. As the plane descended onto the runway, Alizee thought about the pain, her experiences, and the traumatic events that shaped her future. This is how she prepared for her next task. Gathering up her rage and hatred and focusing it onto the attention of her plans. The plane landed with a whooshing thump. She heard the skid marks as the tired hit the concrete. The plane’s engines whined up as the directional covers closed on the turbine vents. The plane started to shake and she thought that she was going to throw up. There was a bag there and even though it was not used this time, that all could change if the ride got bumpier.

Thank god for that… She was out of the plane and walking through the terminal when a man grabbed her by the arm. She was startled and moved away out of his grasp.

“Excuse me… but you dropped this.” The man finished. He was holding out a piece of paper.

Her eyes locked onto the paper and she tried to figure out if it was her notes or something else. She went numb inside. She gingerly reached for the paper, expecting the man to try and arrest her. It didn’t happen. The man nodded and made eye contact for a brief moment. She returned the gaze quizzically. This man was rather handsome… He smelled very pleasant and was well groomed despite his chiseled features. His hair was long by men’s standards and it radiated a deep brown hue. He wore a relatively bland button up shirt with western style pockets. His pleated slacks were clean and pressed. His demeanor spoke of a well disciplined and focused outlook. He seemed rather confident in himself and when he spoke, the words were smooth. “Coming here on business?” he questioned.

Alizee didn’t know how to respond. After all he could have looked at the paper. I was in French so she wasn’t worried too much. But what if he spoke French? Her paranoia was getting the best of her, and she forced her panic down.

“Désolé, excusez-moi !” she replied, hoping that the French would throw him off. He stood there just smiling. She though, good maybe he’ll leave me alone now…

“Parlez-vous Français?” he timed perfectly. A shock streaked across her face quickly covered by a hesitating a smile. “Pardon, Monsieur...” she ended. Alizee walked off then, glancing at the paper… it wasn’t in French but English. Her command of the English language was good, some would even think that she was from Louisiana by her accent, but her reading of some of the more complicated words was a bit troublesome. The paper read ‘I can’t help but not notice you. Would you care for dinner?’ There was a number on it too.

Earlier that day, she’d taken a taxi to the bus station where she waited for her route to Boston. Watching the scenery go by through the bus window, she could not help but think about France, how she loved the country there. It was a stark contrast to where she was now, but alluring at the same time. She thought about Trystine, about her innocence. Somehow Alizee managed to separate her longings from her realities. When she was away on ‘business’ she turned into a killer, she was calculated, refined and patient. But when she was at home with Trystine, she was giddy, happy, and anxious. It was like she had become two different people. All she could hope for was that the previous would die with the last one. Then she could move on and pursue her dreams. Dreams! What dreams? She had been so consumed with her vendettas that she never thought about her future. Before she knew it, the quiet darkness took her.

+ + +

After looking over the preliminary reports, Jim realized that every single victim in the file was military. But from what branch and why was there nothing on these guys’ records? It was all confusing to him. He had to figure this out. He turned to his computer and clicked an icon. Groupwise mail opened and he began to fill in the address. As he typed out his message, he also mumbled what he was typing; it was sort of a habit that allowed him to keep his train of thought while using email.

“My friend, informer… I seek information on 5 people that have come up dead in my case. Could you please see why these people’s military careers have been erased?” He paused for a moment. “And if you are interested, I’ll be in DC this weekend, you can reach me at 555-5785. Attached is the list of the 5 men I need information on.”

“Pee Ess, can you tell me if you find anything what platoon or squad they belonged to as well as getting the rest of the names on that list?” He stopped to tap his chin. “Thanks, I owe you one.”

Jim got up and grabbed his suitcase, car keys and a few other things; he had a road trip to go on and wanted to get a head start. It was a long drive from Langley to Washington.

+ + +


She heard the screams again, and the guns… the men were hitting her mother. She heard herself say “ils daddy?” then the man closest to her say “Shit up Bitch!” and moved over to her wielding a rifle. He didn’t point it at her, but instead hit her with it. She heard her dad, heard gun shots. The whimpering of her mother echoed through the darkness. It was a wave washing ashore and breaking on the coast of her soul. She tried to get up but she couldn’t.

She was being pushed, shoved and suddenly she was awake. The man that stood above her, towering, was trying to wake her. The bus had stopped and when she got up, she realized that they were already in Boston, at the bus terminal. The bus driver explained to her that she had slept the whole trip. He’d pulled into the terminal and unloaded everyone and even took a fifteen minute break for a smoke, thinking she would wake and get her belongings… But she was still there, snoring away, in a deep trance of her nightmares.

Quickly composing herself, Alizee grabbed her suitcase and walked out of the terminal. She walked a lot and it was not a nuisance to walk a few blocks to find a motel. She checked in and for the next few days, studied the motel and everyone that came and went. She was getting the feel of the area, and started to figure out her best course of escape incase she needed to run. She did that everywhere she went. There were a few close calls, because of her disciplined habits and keen sense of intuition, Alizee was able to disappear when those times arose.

Spending countless hours monitoring the address where her package was delivered, Alizee was convinced that nobody suspected anything unusual. She picked up the rifle and went to a remote area of the country to inspect the weapon. Time for a little target practice her mind went on. Assembly of the rifle was easy, she managed to beat her all time record of having that thing ready in less than 7 seconds. Not that speed meant anything… if she were in a situation where it would warrant speed, she’d just use a pistol instead. After all, she didn’t have anything to loose… Or did she? The question smacked her in the face. Lately, she’d been subsiding in her vindications. She found that she was becoming more and more normal in her constant battle of hatred and remorse. Remorse was winning and she felt good about that. With each kill, Alizee was in fact killing off demons that plagued her. As of late the dreams have been less consistent and with each dream, she’d remembered more. It was all coming together for her. She would start here, move to her 3 other marks and then go back to France. Still though, she still could not determine if she had been tracked through out this ordeal. Always looking over her shoulder and wondering if she had been made. It was a tickle at the back of her throat that kept her alert. She had grown accustomed to it, but lately that tickle had become more of a chap.

She had a few weeks to stage his retirement plans. He was up for re-election and his campaign was starting soon, she planned to take him on one of these occasions. As she sat there and thought about the encounter, she played out in her mind all of the aspects of the event, how they would occur and where she would be when they occurred. The cool temperature of the rifle’s muzzle rested on her cheek. She had not fired it yet. It smelled clean, well oiled, just as she had left it when it was placed in the box. She admired its perfection, it was meant to do one thing, and it did it well. She was almost jealous though… If this PSG-1 had a soul, it would never question its existence. I would know exactly what to do and how to do it. There were no gray areas it was all black and white to Mr. PSG-1. Glancing at the rifle, she knew that it would perform as a surgeon would. Slightly modified to fit a 10 centimeter suppressor, the barrel was shortened enough to compensate for the extra weight. She eyed the apple it wasn’t moving atop the rock she’d placed it on. Just under 400 meters, the apple was completely oblivious to its eminent death. A few adjustments and the image was in focus.

She could feel the tension in the trigger, could hear it speaking to her. It beckoned her to release it. To allow it to do what it was meant for. Steady now, she thought. The rifle pleaded at this point, I wanted to fulfill its destiny, and she knew that with her intervention, it would succeed. She smiled at that. The thought of this thing having a soul made her giggle a little, it was rather silly even. But the contrast to what it was, made the thought intriguing. She squeezed the trigger and felt the rifle slightly kick. Smoke came from the barrel she peered through the scope to see a now destroyed apple on a rock. Wait? She didn’t even register the sound… the whisper if its release under shadowed the recoil and its reloaded chamber. Her smile went wide. She picked up the spent cartridge and dismantled the rifle. I have to give you a bath later, she thought.

DavidAlizée
25th July 2005, 23:46
oops sorry i guess i posted in this thread. Oh darn

Quentin
26th July 2005, 22:24
+ + +

Jim arrived in DC 5 hours earlier than expected, of course this was hastened by the fact that his contact in DC actually found exactly what he’d been searching for. It was early in the AM and he went straight to the FBI offices in Washington, to the office of Lisa Hunsaker. She was an old flame in his life that caught on to his promiscuous activities. She didn’t care too much at the time, just was expecting more from a man with his charisma. He thought that she would stop seeing him, but she insisted that they remain exclusive with no commitments. He liked that, but it all ended when he was reassigned to Langley to head up the new division of unsolved cases. How he missed her passion and every time he came to DC, he hoped to rekindle that spark, but she’d grown away from him and never seemed interested. Like a cat bored with an old play toy.

He brought all his files with him to compare notes with what she had found on this ‘shadow unit’. He stood in front her office, straightened his time, checked his breath and sniffed his coat to see if he smelled. All was good. He knocked on the door.

“Come in, its open…” the muffled door responded. Jim opened the door. Before him stood a well blessed tall blond and she was steaming! She was sitting at her desk going over some files when he entered. Jim immediately noticed her breasts and how they struggled to get out of her off-white shirt. She didn’t even look up, but instead adjusted her glasses and casually brushed her dangling hair over one of her earlobes. She wore black, always wore black. And it looked good on her.

“Well, hello to you too” he spouted sarcastically. She didn’t even respond. But rather continued to comb over the files in her face. “Have a seat, you might want to hear this” The seriousness in her tone commanded him to obey.

“What is it?” he implored. “Your shadow unit” she replied. “They were in fact CIA. You were looking in the wrong agency.”

Jim looked puzzled. He couldn’t have over looked something so obvious as that. Maybe he was getting rusty. Just has he thought that, she continued “Did you even check the CIA database?” she scolded. “Maybe you are getting rusty.” He scowled at her.

“Well, I hope that is what you are looking for.” She added. “It is… now I have to put all this together…” he mindlessly chattered while looking through the paperwork. “Thanks hun, I owe you dinner tonight.” He said abruptly and exited the room.

“Not if I can help it” she shouted to him.

Jim wasn’t listening, he had found out that the entire unit was only 12 agents; they worked covert ops on missions in Europe. All retired now and everything they did was in this file… he didn’t have the clearance to read this, but Lisa did. She didn’t know that his clearance was reduced last year. To any event, he had searched the CIA database but, because of his clearance level, nothing turned up. Now though that all changed. He had what he needed to link these five deaths together. Of the 12 that were in this unit, minus the 5, 4 remained. 3 died on other missions in the field and the rest retired or disappeared only to turn up later in his lap. Something big was happening and he could feel it.

Later that day, he checked into a hotel down the street and he focused on reading every little detail about the file reading it over and over. I wanted to burn the information in so that when or if something was significant, he would be able to better piece the story together. These guys were brutal and he found himself amazed that the CIA let them get away with all that they did. These guys were responsible for assassinations of political influences across Europe, kidnapping of inventors of leading technology, interception of documents to forge alliances, blackmailing foreign officials and even threatening Parliament at one point. These guys were hardcore he thought. Who ever was knocking these people off was way out of his league. Russian mafia, Yakuza, or something more… he speculated. Among many of their exploits, Jim read something about them killing a French man for working with the Russians on some secret project, of course this was before the fall of the USSR. It was brutal and he felt sorry for the little girl that was left behind. These men deserved to die, but it wasn’t his place or the killers to pass judgment on them. The law was the law. One of the names caught his eye, and he realized that this man was important. He’d heard the name before back in September of 2001. He made a quick phone call to the offices of the FBI, Boston and inquired about the politician. He was alive and well by their estimates.

Jim looked through all of his notes on the black dagger file and nothing seemed to create any patterns. But something triggered him to look at the original enlistment list from the 80s. The men were listed by rank in the military not first or last name, as the usual methods. He compared these to the order the men were found dead. He had a match. That would prove the assassin’s next target would be…. Jim’s eyes went wide. He grabbed the phone again and called the Boston office.

+ + +

She watched as he performed his speeches… noted all of the few body guards that loosely surrounded his campaign. He was running for the Senate and not considered a far left by American standards so his assassination was not expected. Still though, the secret service added some small presence on his campaign trail. Her ex had taught her how to find secret service, he used to make fun of them on the tele when they watched the pathetic presidency elections. She didn’t forget. This would prove to be one of the most difficult tasks in her overall mission. The timing had to be right and she thought about attempting it tomorrow, it would be the last time for another week and she didn’t want to stay here another week. It was too dangerous; she was always told that if you stay in one spot too long, you would eventually be discovered by the most idiotic of things. She applied that theory to what she was doing. But he was talking about field combat. Well to her this was field combat, of a more urban type she mused. Testing the reflexes of these men, she clicked a button on a remote control and pop pop! The hotdog stand in the crowd just blew its motor. The men jumped onto the mayor extremely fast, 2 others drew their weapons and were scanning the crowd. A car moved in from the street and pulled up along side of the campaign platform, they ushered him into the car and they sped off. The 2 remaining secret service men moved about the area looking for anyone with a gun. From a distance she could see them looking at the hotdog stand and surmising that it was not what they expected. They relaxed.

She was confident that once they found out the source of the some explosions, they would call it a false alarm and not think anything of it next week. She laughed at how predictable these Americans were. Oh well, I’d better be going, she thought. She had plan out the next few encounters if she were to get back France and back to Tryst. Curious that she was thinking about the little girl more often, was she getting attached to Trystine? She cared more about her than anything in her life and when she was with Tryst, she felt normal. That revelation surprised Alizee… she didn’t know how to handle it. For as long as she could remember, Alizee was filled with hate. But it all started to slip away one day at a time. She was getting sloppy again and the more she spent with Trystine, the more careless she got.

Determination set her in motion that day and she went instead to find the next mark that was in DC. The man that owned a pawn shop downtown and she had no problems in finding the location’s information on the internet. She planned on paying him a visit in the middle of the week. She’d come back for ‘the would’ be Senator on the following weekend when their panicked state turned to normal.

+ + +

Jim arrived in Boston the following day, it was an emergency so he’d gotten permission to have the FBI transport take him there first thing in the morning. When he arrived at the FBI office in Boston, he found that they had already alerted the Mayor. The Mayor explained to the FBI that they had an ‘Incident’ yesterday. The police confiscated the hotdog stand until the mess got cleared up. Jim ordered the Forensics team to investigate the stand on a hunch and his hunch was right. They found the remains of some type of receiver in the whole mess of burned engine parts. The Lab rats said that it was Russian made and that enforced Jim’s theory that it was in fact the Russian Mafia behind all these killings. But why, what motive did the Russians posses that spurred them to kill ex CIA agents. Of all their various missions, He’d never read anything on the KGB or the Kremlin. This was getting more and more mysterious to him and he rationalized that either there was something bigger at work here or he was wrong. Since the evidence pointed to the Russians he was almost positive that it was the former and not the latter. He needed more information. It was going to be a long week indeed.

+ + +

She arrived in DC and didn’t even bother to stop for a hotel instead she went straight to the pawn shop. It was late and she expected the shop to be closed, it wasn’t. She walked in and the store was void of people. There were all sorts of junk stacked on shelves with price tags on them. She walked through and was pretending to look for something that she needed. She noticed that the man behind the counter was the one he was looking for. Her heart jumped, this was the one that had hit her with the stock of his rifle. She felt the all too familiar pumping of adrenaline through her veins. She made a once around the store looking for anyone that might deter her effort. The man behind the counter was a sorry sap, unshaven and wearing dirty smelling rags. He was overweight and she could see the tattoos on his forearms, yes he was definitely the one. She walked up to him and she could see through the cage, that he had a gun strapped to his waist.

“Excuse me; do you have any working computers?” She timidly asked. The man spoke in a rather gruff voice, he sounded like his throat had collapsed at one point. “Yea, sure little lady… right over here.” He replied.

He came out from behind the counter and moved over to another counter. She was right behind him and she drew out her knife. They approached the entrance of the building and just as she was getting ready to slit his throat, the door opened.

“Ah… Marcus, I was beginning to think you would not visit after all these years.” The man addressed the new customer. “Why would I ever not come and see you, of all people!” Marcus replied. She recognized the face and the name as one of her targets, and she thought, how could this get any better. She grinned at her fortunes.

She was close enough, the knife silently punctured his artery, completely imbedded and released. Her right arm reached for the gun. She let the falling body’s weight draw the pistol for her. She could measure the look on Marcus’s face when he realized his best friend was dead. A look of shock struck his face instantly has he recognized the little girl. The body fell and up went her arm and she took aim. It seemed like an eternity as she watched the sight move up to his face. She didn’t even focus on him but rather the end of the sight, to be sure that it was inline with him. Just one shot, BANG! His shock was doubled as he realized what had just happened. He was numb all over but that didn’t matter, for all he knew he was just standing there. He could not see anything at all, his vision went black and the burning image of her silhouette was all that he remembered before the end.

She dropped the gun and looked at the dying man before her feet. He was grasping onto what little shred of life left in him. Gurgling and gasping for air, he tried to stem the free flowing of his blood by holding the wound. It was no use. His body went limp and the tell tale pumping of his blood stopped signifying that his heart pushed its last reflex. It was over in a matter of seconds and she was satisfied. Five left she thought. Alizee locked the door and turned off all the lights to the shop. She removed her gloves and put them in a tin trashcan. Some of his blood got on her left hand as the knife went in. She doused the gloves with some kerosene on the shelf and lit it with her lighter. She watched it for a good while as it burned. She was sure that the gloves were completely consumed and reduced to ash. She exited the building from the back and walked away from two of her now gone demons.

Quentin
27th July 2005, 22:33
It was morning and Mayor Augustine climbed out of bed. He hadn’t seen anything unusual about the past week. Just a little paranoid I guess, he’d thought. Today was a big day for him and this would be the milestone to his political career. He got enough backing from donations to actually run for the senate.

His wife slept soundlessly aside him the whole night. She moved ever so slightly as he got out of bed all the while mumbling something. He paid her no heed, as he knew it was just her talking in her sleep again. Walking half tired to the bathroom for his morning shower, Augustine didn’t even notice that his hallway window was slightly cracked open allowing the fresh spring air to filter in.

+ + +

Ali watched as the man arose from his nightly slumber. She didn’t even have to worry about the man’s wife, during the night Alizee applied a heavy sedative to the woman’s night gown, completely odorless and extremely effective, the woman would not wake for hours to come. She felt for the older lady, having to wake up to find out that the man she loved had been killed. Alizee thought about taking her life too, just to spare her the misery, but then again she had no reason to. She had scoped out the house a few nights earlier and watched as the heavy secret service kept close tabs on her target. She found it curious that the protection doubled in the past few days… She figured that they were just warming up for his big speech. She had been there all night waiting for him to separate from his wife long enough to die. The sun was not up yet and she was debating whether to just go in there and kill him or wait for him to get up at the same time everyday. The car on the street had no movement and she wasn’t too concerned about them. From her vantage point she could pluck off anyone in the house if they were in front of a window. There weren’t many obstructions around those windows and she congratulated herself for picking the right time. The lawn maintenance crew had just finished pruning the trees yesterday giving way to line of sight with her PSG-1. She was eager to get done with this.

+ + +

Jim and his temporary partner were on duty today. Their shift had started around midnight and would continue on through till around nine am. He’d been too quick to jump on the possibility that this Mayor would be the next target for the Russians. It was a long and uneventful week and he’d had nothing better to do than to wait for someone to make a move. It didn’t come though and he was beginning to think that there was no connection between these killings at all. It was late, or early depending on how he looked at it. Another hour before the first hint of daytime would peek the skies. He would not approach the Mayor’s house until the Mayor and his wife were decent. He waited for the call that he needed to re-secure the house. All in a days work he thought.

+ + +

She focused the scope and adjusted the rifle to follow him as he wandered around the house. She could see almost clearly as day with the nighttime sight she had mounted in her PSG-1 and was glad for it too, she didn’t want to miss the first time.

+ + +

The Mayor was fixing himself a cup of coffee and he went to the door to get the morning paper. He wasn’t feeling well and needed to get some heart burn medicine because of last night’s Chinese food. He opened the door and his heart burn kicked in. He was thinking about going back to the medicine cabinet, but he was already out the door. He might as well get the paper first. Something was wrong though; he felt weak and didn’t know exactly why. Was he having a Heart attack? His answer came with another sting to the chest causing more pain. He clutched it and looked to see blood soaking his shirt. He staggered and fell to his knees. Before the Mayor knew what really happened, he’d fell to the ground to never again rise.

+ + +

Jim watched as the Mayor opened the door and walked out. He knew what the man was doing and he’d done it every morning for the past week. But what caught him off guard was the fact that the Mayor fell to his knees before even reaching the sidewalk.

“SHIT!” Jim grunted and he opened the door to his Crown Victoria. His partner moved also and they both drew their guns. He grabbed his radio and keyed it up for transmission.

“Charlie two one, to control… I need a medic to the corner of Spruce and Wayward Street as soon as possible.” He stated dramatically.

When he reached the Mayor he could see blood coming from underneath him and immediately conveyed this to his partner with some hand gestures. They took cover close enough to the man to check on his vitals. He was dead. And the killer was around there somewhere. He surveyed the situation and calculated the angles of the shooter. He peeked around the tree he was behind and looked for the shooter.

+ + +

She watched has he discovered that the man had in fact been killed. She watched as he checked his vitals, waited for the signal that she wanted him to convey to his partner. Yes, he was dead and the secret service agent just confirmed it. He was looking in her direction then and she thought that he had spotted her. So she gave off a warning shot. She meant to miss him and that was all the distraction she needed to make her escape.

Alizee climbed off the roof of the house she was on and landed quietly. Her rifle was strapped on her back and she drew a USP45-SD. She needed to be cunning here, knew that these men were more trained then she. But she had an advantage, they didn’t know what to look for, and she was never seen up until now. At least not yet anyways. She moved along the side of the house and onto the street. She was spotted, she heard the men yelling at her, telling her to stop or they would shoot. It didn’t matter. They were far enough away to not get a good look at her. Just then, another car pulled up in the scene. It veered toward her and stopped. Two more men got out and she rolled behind a parked car to her left. She heard the gun shots hit the car. Expecting her to try and run for cover along the street, she caught a glimpse of the men moving to the other side. She was trapped. Her decision to return fire was out of survival more or less and she beaded one of the men approaching her from the house. Crouching in a stable position, she took aim and fired 3 rounds. All of which hit her target. The man fell grasping his chest. He was motionless.

+ + +

Jim watched as the form moved from out of the house and ran down the street. “FBI… STOP… OR I’LL SHOOT” he declared. But the form kept running. He was too far away to trust his aim to be true. His partner, a man named Roy, gave chase without regard for his own safety. Jim radioed in that the suspect was on foot and he needed back up. The other unmarked had been late this time and Jim was thankful for that, he watched as the car identified the suspect and moved to cut him off. They exited the vehicle and opened fire on the perpetrator. The assailant rolled behind a car for cover. Jim started off, everything seemed to act in slow motion and he watched helplessly as the suspect shot Roy. He went down and Jim moved behind his car for cover. He could see Roy clutching his chest where he had been hit. He looked over the hood of his car to see if he had a clear shot at the suspect, but he was gone. Jim scanned the street and the yards that flanked the suspect’s previous position. No good, he cautiously stood up, half expecting to be shot at but it didn’t come. He moved over to his partner and checked his wounds. Roy was a seasoned veteran of the FBI and he wasn’t even concerned that the vest he wore stopped the bullets. He wanted to neutralize his threat hoping that his attacker would move on to another target until he could get out of the line of fire.

+ + +

Alizee was desperate now, she had nowhere to run. One down but there was three more. One agent approached her side of the car, the other flanked her position and she was running out of options. She peered under the car to see the mans feet slowly walk around to her location, crouching low, she took aim at his leg and popped one off. He fell into her view and she finished him off with a round to the head. She moved toward the slain agent around behind the car and out of view of the other two agents. The second car was still running and she could hear the chatter of the FBI radio inside. She waited a few minutes and watched for the last man’s where-abouts. He had moved to the first dead agent. She watched as he pulled the man to his car.

“Merde” she murmured. She holstered her USP and un-slung her rifle and took aim on the man pulling the still form of the other agent. She fired and the man fell. He didn’t move either. The last agent was still on the other side of the car and she knew he had seen her take down the other two. He had nothing else to do but either wait for her to leave or try and take her out himself. He chose the latter. With almost blind ferocity, the agent quickly rose to his feet and pointed his firearm in her direction, his eyes searching for a target, there was none. He didn’t see her. What he didn’t know was that she had moved to the car he was hiding behind and was circling around behind him. He moved in reverse towards her and she jumped up and let loose 1 round… he didn’t hear it, didn’t even feel it as the bullet punctured his skull. All he knew was that she was there, he tried to turn but his body would not respond. His vision of her became red and he felt a warm sensation on his face then he fell into darkness.

Alizee was confident that none of them were still kicking. In fact she had waited a long moment like she always did to see of any of then wanted more. She doubted it though 2 of the 4 had fatal injuries and she justified it as them being in her way of justice. Like the hunter, she rationalized the situation that it would be either her or them, and she intended on living past this day.

+ + +

Jim was wounded and he felt the sting of the bullet wound in his shoulder. It hit high enough to miss the vest he wore, yet low enough to go right through his shoulder. It wasn’t fatal but he was afraid that if he moved, the suspect would finish him off. This guy was a professional he thought and after he heard the suspect drive off in one of the FBI cars he surveyed the scene. Roy was getting up and checking his vest. Jim could see that the other two agents were dead, the holes in the back of their heads left him with little doubt. He heard Roy radio in for more medical support and he tried to explain to the dispatch officer what the suspect looked like. But Roy didn’t get a good enough look at the suspect to get a positive ID. They even called in air support, to try and track the stolen car, but that ended when they found the car in a ditch, burning in a fiery blaze.

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Quentin
29th July 2005, 19:04
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After crashing the car, Alizee ran across an open field that flanked the neighborhood she was just in. She could hear sirens and helicopters in the distance. She surveyed the scene and watched as squad car after unmarked car raced passed. She would wait for the all clear and move across from street to street, until she got to where she needed to be. Just under a mile away was a train yard. There she waited for the predictable quick stop of a cargo train. Unsuspecting engine conductors didn’t even see her board one of the cars. The Sun started to peek from the skyline and she knew that they would leave for New York soon. She removed the rifle and slid the box car door closed. The next stop was a small town where the train would go to pick up some added cargo, then it would continue on to New York. She planned to exploit this moment and grab her car which she had placed there over a week ago. Thinking ahead was a good thing she thought.

When she got to her stop, Alizee went to her car and stripped all of her clothes and put them in the trunk, she didn’t even bother covering up. She opened the front door and grabbed her dress. Wiggling and slipping it over herself, she jumped in the car and drove off. From there she would take the road west to where she was staying. On the way out, she went to the food mart and picked up a few things; bread, milk, eggs, some flour, and even some vegetables. It was cooking time.

It was still early when the police car pulled up behind her, she was driving the speed limit and using all the proper turn signals when making her turns. The cop was running her plates she knew and felt confident that the car would come back as ok. She thought for a minute that she would be discovered, but played cool. He continued to follow her and she knew that he was trying to make her nervous. She played it as usual. The lights flashed and she slowly moved to the side of the road. The cop pulled up behind her and she rolled down the window, grabbed the paperwork and also pulled the hammer back on her pistol. The cop came up to the side of the window and she looked at him expectantly.

“Drivers License, Registration and Insurance please” the cop prompted. Alizee presented her Passport as well as the car’s registration and insurance proof. “I’ll be right back” the cop stated. “Please turn off your vehicle…”

Alizee complied. He was going to run her passport and come up with nothing, she was ready for something like this. She had paid good money to an old lady in the town she was staying at. In exchange for a good story and use of her car, Alizee could keep herself clean from any suspicious situations. Posing as a foreign exchange student in the US laws for education, she would fit right in as being from France. The cop returned and he gave her all of her information back.

“In America, we all have to have driver’s license, a passport does not give you the right to operate a car on the road.” He stated rather loudly.

“I understand officer,” she paused “I just went to get some groceries for my host.” She smiled at him.

He looked her over and was smiling back. She was remarkably beautiful and her soft tone was accented by the rising sun. He could smell her, it was a spicy and musky yet sweet smell at the same time. He’d never smelled that kind of perfume before but he was glad he did. She moved some hair that was blowing in her face over behind her earlobe and he thought he was going to beg. She licked her lips, not in a way that would suggest she meant for him to see, but in a normal way. He felt himself get hard. She had a natural beauty and he could appreciate that. He found that she was borderline irresistible, had he not been a cop, he would consider taking her. If he could, he would arrest her, just to able to spend more time in her presence. He thought it was crazy that he could be so drawn to a young women half his age.

He stated with a sheepish grin, “Promise me you’ll get your license and I won’t give you this citation.”

Alizee just smiled right back and replied “Thank you officer, for understanding.” The cop walked back to his car and got in, turned off the lights and drove off, all the while smiling at her as he passed.

The next day Alizee sat in her motel room staring at the wall. The cigarette she was smoking was down to the butt and hadn’t been ashed since maybe the first drag. The weight of her actions pounded her morality, she was changing, her hatred was leaving her and she felt bad for killing those men. Weeks ago she would not care about collateral damage, but today she found that she did care about it. Her eyes were swollen from tears and her cheeks were irritated from her rubbing them all night long. She didn’t get any sleep and she was exhausted from yesterday’s ordeal. She was listening to the handheld FBI radio she took from the unmarked car. It was all the warning system she needed to be aware if they found out where she was. Her rifle was dismantled on the floor by the bed and the room smelled of a mixture of gun oil and cigarette smoke. A few chirps from the radio grabbed her attention. She could hear that two of the four agents were alive and in stable condition. She was slightly relieved at that and at the same time, she started to cry again. Not trying to hold anything back, she let it all out. Her body shook as she pouted and all she could do to calm her self was think about Trystine. She was like an anchor for Alizee and every time she thought of the 12 year old, she couldn’t help but long to see her again. They had a bond of some sorts. Sisters, orphans, and loners they were akin to each other in so many ways, yet their diverse personalities were so opposite that each needed each other for support. Alizee stopped crying then and started to pack all of her stuff for the flight home.

Getting on the plane proved easy enough, she had prepared the lead box for shipping to an address in Naples, Italy. It would be shipped a week from today with specific instructions to pick it up at the location that she had it dropped off. Earlier that year, she had tested out the International mail system by shipping questionable items in similar boxes, none of them were ever suspected and she was confident that this one wouldn’t be either. Even if they did find out what was in it, it was in no way tied to her. Even the address was fake, so she would not be worried about any discoveries there. Part of being invisible was to never use your real credentials when traveling and she had an impressive array of fake passports and IDs that she used in intervals of months at a time. She met someone through her ex that specialized in such things, and with his help, she was able to travel to just about any country in the west without ever being suspected. It had been just 24 hours since her encounter with the FBI, and she caught on the morning news that there was a killer at large but the broadcast said nothing about who the suspect was. She smiled at that, they hadn’t found out yet.

As the plane Taxied along the runway at JFK international, she was glancing about, checking for any thing unusual when she caught someone looking at her. She fainted a blush with a smile acting like she got caught admiring the man she caught. He just turned the other way. It was yet another sign that she was being watched but by who? She wanted to go over to the man and question him, but this wasn’t the time or the place. She decided that she would keep an eye on him until she was able to ditch him if he followed her. Just 4 more she thought.

+ + +

Jim and Roy were in debriefing when they heard the news that their attacker had hit 2 more people in DC earlier in the week. Jim already knew that those two victims were on his list of names. But what surprised him was that he had found out the killer was on video tape. The pawnshop owner always recorded his lobby. It paid off this time for the sake of his misfortunes. The tape was being copied and sent to his location for evaluation. Jim was almost excited to hear the news, finally a break in his case, finally he could measure up this person if he could get some kind of visual match in the Interpol database.

The results were in before he even got out of debriefing. The research tech didn’t find a single person in Interpol that reflected the face of the suspect on the tape. Something that intrigued him even more was the fact that the suspect was a she. He had already fallen victim to her exploits and he never even seen her, It didn’t even register to him that she was young, or beautiful. He’d over looked all of that, what he saw before him was some exotic foreign assassin that eluded the finest of field agents. He knew she was dangerous, knew that if he wasn’t careful, his bullet wound could be on his forehead. He had no doubts that she meant to miss him the first time, and even the second time. But why did she kill the other two agents. Maybe because, like when an animal is cornered, they fight back to kill, she had done just that. This made her even more mysterious to him. He found that he was beginning to admire her. No, it was more respect than admiration. He was wise in thinking that of course, if he underestimated her again he and anyone he was with would wind up dead. That notion did not sit well with him, he’d been close to death before, but he took it all for granted. The difference between this one and all the others, was the fact that he knew how deadly she could be. It was a perilous thought, even to him, a seasoned special agent of the FBI.

+ + +

“How could this happen? I want answers!” The director demanded. He was agitated and pacing the conference room floor wasn’t calming him down.

“Sir, my assessment of this… person, is that they had everything well planned, extremely intelligent and thorough.” Arnie concluded. “I seriously doubt that the field agents knew what they were dealing with then they pulled up on the scene.”

Director Motts looked at Arnie a long moment, “Well, you’d better find out more about this… person. I want her taken down.”

“Yes sir.” Was all Arnie could say.

Director Motts was a hard man, and as the director of the east coast operations, Motts was notorious for screaming and yelling. Arnie’s sole job for the FBI was to profile suspects, to get in their head to determine how they think and better understand them. He mulled over all of the testimonies of the police involved, witnesses to killings from Chicago and other locations, and watched the surveillance tape over and over to determine what kind of criminal she was. He knew she was ruthless, remorseless and disciplined. He could see it in her walk. How she scoped out the building before making a move. The fact that the man who was killed addressed her as a new customer led him to believe that she had never been in there before. The way that she handled that unsuspecting visitor in the middle of her attempt told him that she didn’t panic, that she was a quick thinker and knew how to take advantage of any situation.

He surmised that this was how she neutralized 4 FBI agents in less than 4 minutes, just 2 minutes shy of their quickest back up response. For some, 2 minutes can be a lifetime, for others it would be the last moments of freedom. But for her, those 2 minutes were all she needed to secure her freedom. There were teams all over the place, with K-9 looking for her through the neighborhood, Patrol stops of any vehicles driving in the vicinity. They even checked the sewer systems. How did she evade the search effort was a mystery to everyone. All motel and hotels were searched for the suspects weapons and clothing. The sheriff’s department as well as the local Boston Police in association with the FBI yielded no arrests, no gun, no girl. He was baffled and that’s why the director had chewed his ass out. They came to him for answers like that and for the longest time, he’d been studying the case as a favor to his friend Jim who worked at headquarters. Still though, even with the new information on the case… he still could not categorize her methods or train of thought. It appeared as of she were a machine programmed to do one thing. And there was still the question of motive. His only guess was that she was well trained.

+ + +

Gregory and Tom met in a private room somewhere down south. They both had heard about the killings if their ex CIA team, and wanted to talk about securing their safety. They could not make any public statements or otherwise alert their stalker. What they planned to do was get all information on the case that the FBI possessed. That’s what they were talking about now. They sure as hell weren’t going to wait for their assassin to come knocking on the door, no they were going to set the stage themselves. All they needed was the case files and they knew exactly who to talk to get them.

+ + +

Jim had the computer geeks clean up a snapshot of the girl in the video, so good they were that the picture almost did her justice. He didn’t know that but if anyone seen the now printed photo, they would agree. He ordered that picture to be posted on the evening news. The snapshot was plastered all over the various police departments and other law enforcement agencies all over the US. In a matter of just a few hours, the story was making national headlines. Jim was satisfied at this and wanted to give her something to think about. He knew she was watching and knew that she would try and run. As soon as the reports came in, Jim would have his specially assembled team to respond. And hopefully capture, not kill the suspect. He wanted so bad to get this assassin that he could see the outcome even before it happened. He had to control her movements, give her no place to hide or run for that matter. She would try, and he would be there waiting.

+ + +

Her plane landed and it was now her turn to exit the plane. The man she was watching had already gotten off, and he gave no indication that he was interested in her throughout the flight. She didn’t let that dissuade her however, she knew that he was up to something and if he did not show his face when she left the airport, she would be surprised. No signs of the man, she grabbed her luggage and went to the long term check out. It was a few long moments to process the information to get her car out, while she waited she watched the news, and to her surprise, she seen a picture of herself as being wanted in the deaths of 2 federal agents and 1 politician. In the segment, she was also accused of killing 2 police officers, a shop owner and his customer, and 3 other civilians. It wasn’t a good photo, but good enough to be matched with her.

“Bien cela résout ce problème…” she mumbled to herself. The news segment she had just watched ended her vendetta to bring justice to her parents killers. This changed everything and she needed to move into her final stages earlier than planned. She grabbed her keys and drove from Paris to southern France, the only thing on her mind was seeing Trystine again.

(Translation: Well that solves that problem...)
+ + +

She heard the all too familiar of gun fire, heard the screams and when she came around, she saw that the men had gone. The room was in shambles, her father was laying there, half of his head gone, splattered on the floor. Her mother lay just a few feet away, her clothes were ripped away from her bare form and she could see that her mother was still breathing. She went to her mom and talked to her, she was crying now and she knew her mom was going to die. Her bones were broken, and she could see bruises along her chest and face. Her arm didn’t look as it was supposed to, it was crooked, her side was caved in, and Alizee could see something white poking out of the side of her mom’s chest. Blood came from that area and it was fast making a puddle. She didn’t know what to do. “maman?” she wimpered. “La maman réveillez-vous s'il vous plaît”
(Translation: Mom… Mom please wake up)

“Dirigé Alizee, recevez l'aide, je vous aime. Dépêcher.” Her dying mom whispered. Alizee cried more, and she didn’t know what to do.
(Translation: Run alizee, get help, I love you. Hurry)

“Mon enfant, vous devez aller reçoivent l'aide, s'il vous plaît!” her mom continued. Alizee slowly got up, and her mom rested her head on the ground. She ran out the door and into the street, screaming all the while.
(Translation: My child, you must go get help, please!)

“Quelqu'un aidez-moi s'il vous plaît, ma maman est faite mal, s'il vous plaît!” she kept screaming.
(Translation: Somebody please help me, my mom is hurt, please!)

It was in the middle of the night and a heavy down pour of rain was blanketing the world. As she ran she could feel the gloom and dread wrap around her, smothering her with its entirety, it was no use… no body came, nobody helped her. Alizee sat in the rain repeating the same thing over and over. Soon the rain stopped and the sun started to rise, Alizee still did not find help. She was just seven and her small frame could not support the sorrow it bore through the night, she gave in to weakness and passed out from exhaustion in the middle of the road.

Alizee was awake now, and she lay there in bed, curled up into a ball weeping. She shook violently this time, the sorrow and grief was greater than it ever had been. It washed over her, drowning her in it wake. She cried and cried, pleading with god to help her find peace. In the early hours of the morning, the walls of Alizee’s home echoed to her the pain and agony she felt with the sheer stillness of silence. She cried herself to sleep again, this time too deep to dream.

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I added translations for dialog in french for those of you who can't read french.

Quentin
2nd August 2005, 20:43
Trystine knocked on the door but there was no answer, she knew her friend was home but she wasn’t answering the door. She knocked again and still there was no answer, so she decided to try and find another way in. Tryst wanted to spend time with Ali, she missed her dearly and couldn’t wait for her return. Along the side of Alizee’s house, Tryst found a small rectangular window from a basement room. It was cracked open and she was able to open the window all the way. She slipped through with ease. The room looked as if it had not been in for years. Everything was covered with spider webs and dust. There were pictures and rugs on shelves as well as furniture that had been covered by sheets. The wooden floor creaked as Tryst walked through the room to the stairs. Something caught her eye though and made her pause. It was an old teddy bear, half ripped on one ear, dusty and one of the eyes were dangling off. She gingerly picked up the stuffed animal and inspected it with care. It was brown with a white belly. She shook it a little to get the dust off and continued to the stairs.

The door at the top wasn’t even locked and Tryst opened the door slowly. She’d been around the street a lot and she knew how to be quiet when she didn’t know what was going on. The house was quiet as can be. It was around noon time and she expected Alizee to be up and about cleaning, or cooking as she had always done around this time. But there was nothing, the faint clicking of a clock was all that revealed life within the room. She moved along the hall to Alizee’s room. She was confident that Ali would not be angry for her intrusion, so she continued into her room. Alizee was there sleeping on the bed. She could hear the rhythmic sounds of Alizee in her deep slumber. Tryst decided to climb in bed with her and lay down too. Tryst positioned herself so that her back was to Alizee’s front. Ali stirred for a moment then half awoke to pull Tryst into her.

“Je vous ai manqués” the small voice quietly revealed. And Alizee was happy to hear that.
(I’ve missed you)

“Et je vous ai manqués trop peu un” she murmured back, finishing it off with a warm embrace.
(And I have missed you too little one)

The two of them slept that afternoon in each other’s company. The peace that Alizee dreamt of was more than she’d ever imagined. It was like a fairy tale to her. No horrible nightmares or reoccurring experiences flooded her mind that day. It was like Trystine was a shield against her demons, reflecting the horrors that plagued her soul in the quiet darkness of her mind.

+ + +

”Everything is set.” The man spoke softly. He was talking on the phone with another man that just called him.
“Do you think she knows we are coming?” the voice asked.
“No” he replied. “She doesn’t suspect a thing. You should meet me in Marseille tomorrow evening, at the place specified.”

Tom hung up the phone, and went back to typing on his computer. The plans were set in motion and soon he would have the intel he needed to terminate this assassin. It was just a matter of time before he found out all the details. Tom finished packing his things and just when he finished, he’d gotten a phone call. It was his source from the CIA and they called to give him what he needed.

“Jacotey… Jacotey… where have I heard that name before… “ he’d thought. It was strikingly familiar yet at the same time He could not place the name.

“Anyways, the information will be waiting for you their, All you have to do is pick it up at the hotel desk.” The caller instructed.
“Ok, thanks, I owe you buddy.” Tom said at lasts.
“Don’t mention it” was all the man said in response.

+ + +

Later that week, the girls took a trip to the village market where they shopped for fruit and vegetables. Tonight’s celebration was in honor of Trystine’s birthday and Ali had made plans to cook her a nice dinner and a cake. Trystine had become something of a permanent resident of the Jacotey household these days, and Alizee welcomed the company. It was refreshing as it always was to have the young girl around. Slowly, with each passing day, Alizee would forget all about her inner turmoil and enjoy the friendship that they possessed.

Alizee was moving through the different stands when she noticed someone following her again. She thought that it was the same feelings that struck her before, when she usually sensed someone watching her after she completed one of her tasks. This time though, it was much different. She actually identified the person watching her. He was an English man for sure, probably from the US. He wasn’t good at what he was trying to do. Maybe even meant to be seen, she didn’t fall for it though and she cautiously kept her distance from the man. She was safe here and she knew that they would not try anything in the public. Alizee spotted Trystine talking with one of her other friends. Alizee quickly move out of her sight, in fear that Trystine would be spotted and maybe later kidnapped for the sole benefit of making Alizee play along with what ever game they had in store for her. The man followed without question. Alizee took him around the village and into some allys where she could confront him.

She disappeared around a corner and the man didn’t know where she went. He searched the nooks and crannies only to find a few rats and mice. She watched from a cracked door as the map spoke into his jacket. So, he was not alone… how many of them are there, she wondered.

Just as the man was getting ready to exit the ally, Alizee emerged. He stopped and turned around when he heard the door close. She stood there, hands behind her back and her eyes were focused onto him. It was bound to happen sooner or later, the law of the US catching up to her. He pulled from his jacket a Beretta 9mm equipped with a silencer and started to point it at her. She knew then and there that it was not the US law this man represented but someone else. Her lightening reflexes were far superior then that of the man’s. Her knife slammed into his lower chest with a dull thud and the man hunched over from the impact. She was moving right after the throw, not giving him any time to recover. He did recover though and tried to shoot her. She fell into a roll under his aim as a few rounds went off. They were far from their mark as she came up within the man’s reach. Batting the gun to the side with her right arm, she reversed her momentum and stepped into the man. Her elbow connected with the man’s jaw and he bent over in a heap. Using her left hand she grabbed the man by the collar and pulled him towards her. Her knee went up into the man’s gut and he gasped for breath. She heard the sound of the a gun dropping to the ground and she knew that he was done. Grabbing the back of his hair, she yanked his face up. The man groaned as he clutched the knife in his abdomen. She kicked his hand away from the knife and picked up his gun then knelt beside the man.

She put the gun in the waist of her pants and moved her hand down to the knife handle.

“Who are you, and what do you want with me?” She demanded.

“Ahh… fuck you bitch….” He stated through gritted teeth. She pushed the knife in.

“Ah… I was part.. of… ahh…” the man raspy voice intoned. “You… killed my… ahh… friends…” he managed to finish.

“Where are the other three, I know you are not alone…” She commanded, the knife sliding deeper in.

“Ah… shit…” he protested. “There is just one other…. “He confessed. Not for her benefit as so much as his partner’s. His hand was on the transmitter he wore and he’d been broadcasting their conversation.

“Where…” Alizee prompted.

The smile on his face was enough to know that the man he had contacted on the radio showed up. He had to be behind her, there was no other place for him to be. She slowly pulled the man up to his feet. She wanted to be up and ready for anything. She watched his eyes and they betrayed him. She spun the man around with her has she reached for the pistol in her hand. She beaded the man standing there… then froze.

Trystine shook with fear and she didn’t know what was going on. She was crying and wanted to run to Alizee. But the man holding her wouldn’t allow it. Alizee steadied herself trying to judge the reflexes of the man that had a gun to her beloved Trystine.

“You shoot me and the last thing I will do is take another life that you love.” The man proposed.

“Why did you kill my parents” she asked. The man in her arms was squirming from weakness and she said “He is dying…”

“We all die… Ms. Jacotey It’s just a matter of how and when.” The man countered. Alizee understood the situation and she knew that this was the end of her journeys, as soon as the man she held died, she would have no way to escape. She looked into the eyes of Trystine and silently whispered a sweet apology. Trystine seemed to have understood and smiled in response.

“What do you propose then?” Alizee flatly asked.

“You die as soon as he does… it’s that simple. I go on my merry way back to the US and forget all about you.” He said in confidence.

Tears started to form in her eyes then, and Alizee didn’t even bother to wipe them away. All that she had loved, all that she wanted, was denied and taken from her. And she didn’t even know why.

“I just want to know one thing… Why my parents?” she sobbed the question.

“You never found out did you?” he questioned back. “You see we were part of the CIA, and we were charged with keeping the national security of America at the expense of other entities.” He went on.

“You father invented something that would threaten the economy of the US.” He stated. “He would not sell it, or keep quiet about it, but instead decided to give it to the world as it should have been.” The man smiled then. “I Always thought your father a noble person, too noble for his own good, I guess” he seemed more fond of her father than he let on.

“So you killed him right in front of me? Raped my mother and left her for dead?” She accused.

“Your father, yes, he died because he wouldn’t give up the secrets that he invented. But your mother was another story. The two men that raped her were later killed by me when I found out about it.” He offered. “As for you…” he added “well you turned out to be quite the devil of a killer… I would have never suspected that you were capable of accomplishing what you did.”

“A pity you must die.” He finished.

Alizee had been silently battling within herself on wanting to kill this man. She hesitated because of Trystine; she didn’t want anything to happen to her. But when he had mentioned to her ‘a devil of a killer’, she thought about it and decided that he would die today. Even if she, herself died too, she would die knowing that her parents killer’s were dead also.

“So where is it” he asked.

She thought, he must be talking about my father’s notes. He still wanted the work her father did. How interesting. It was time for him to die she thought. She raised her gun, it seemed like watching movement in water as the gun leveled. He was already aiming at her when she pulled the trigger. He’d gotten his shot off first and his aim was good. She was hit in the shoulder. For the first time in her life, Alizee truly felt pain. Not from the wound, but from the thought that she would never see Trystine again. Her aim however was better and she hit him square in the forehead. He fell to the ground and the man in her arms fell also. She dropped to one knee and let the blood trickle from her shoulder. It was deep she thought, and there was no way that she could make it to a hospital in time to stop the bleeding.

Trystine ran to her and Alizee allowed it. They embraced for a moment and Alizee spoke softly into Tryst’s ear.

“Je vous aime peu un.” She whispered. Trystine cried and she held on tight as Alizee’s form slumped to the ground. There was more blood and all she could think about was the time her and Trystine had slept together, cuddling all the while. The only time she’d ever found peace in her dreams was when Trystine was with her. She smiled at that and was happy that Trystine was there all those nights and the days they had spent in the fields behind her house.

She was getting cold now and she felt tired. She knew it would be all over in a matter of a few moments and all she wanted was to have Trystine with her. She never knew if Trystine stayed by her side that evening or not, she passed out long before then.

+ + +

He was doing his everyday chores when he had heard the screams. It was a high pitched type of scream that seemed to make his Dalmatian whine. He rushed to the window to find in the ally below a little girl holding onto a young woman. There was blood all over the street and there were 2 dead men in the ally also. He rushed down the stairs while his dog followed. He grabbed blankets and some alcohol along the way. He was an animal vet so he had all the necessary thing needed to save this women he thought. But there was little time.

He burst out into the ally and moved to the form on the ground. The dog came out after him and started to sniff the girl clutching the women. She had a weak pulse and he knew that if he didn’t close the wound, she would die. He brought her and the little girl into his house and called for paramedics.

Quentin
2nd August 2005, 23:54
It has been two weeks since that fateful day. Trystine missed her friend dearly and longed to see her. The events that took place in the market didn’t really make much sense to her. But the kind man that tried to save her explained some things to her about good and evil. I appeared to her that Alizee was the evil one at first, but when she had learned that Alizee was protecting her, she found a new sense of respect for the friend she wanted to call mom. Trystine stayed at Alizee’s home day in and day out tending to the chores that needed to be done. She’d hoped that Alizee would come home, but she never did. It hurt her so much and more often than not, she stayed up late at night crying and holding Alizee’s teddy bear.

One day, Trystine decided to try and clean out that dirty basement she had found three weeks earlier. While snooping through some of the boxes, Trystine found a rather thick notebook inside a foot locker. There was another box inside that but it had a combination on it. Being a curious of sorts, Trystine read through the notebook and she didn’t really understand what she was reading but what she did notice was that the pages bore some sort of mathematical formulas. She put it away and continued to clean up the basement. She spotted another box with some binders in it. She picked them up and wiped off the dust and spider webs. Opening them, she found them to be photo albums. They were photos of Alizee’s family. She was looking through them and seeing that Ali did have a happy child hood. There weren’t many photos in the book, in fact it was half empty. She traced Alizee’s childhood through the years from her birth in Corsica. To her 7th birthday on the farm that Alizee now owned. She looked through them and began to feel sorrow for her friend. Trystine was 13 now and she was moving into womanhood. A lot was changing for her and her loneliness for Alizee was compounded all of her emotions. The pain that crept up on her at night came back ten fold, and Trystine buckled over and started to week uncontrollably. She clutched the binder in her arms and sat there crying for hours. She kept thinking how she missed her dear friend. She kept praying to god that she’d find the peace that haunted her friend. It was hard on the girl so when she was visited by the man she now called Dave, the one who came to the rescue of her and her dear friend, she was somewhat happy. He’d come to take her to the hospital, the place where he had taken Alizee for care. She was excited that maybe she was ok and wanted so badly to see her again.

They arrived at the hospital that afternoon and the place was full of sick people. Dave had insisted that Trystine be allowed to come with them during visiting hours. So she was allowed to accompany Dave and the nurse to the recovery dorms. The door opened and Trystine immediately ran in searching for her maternal friend. There she lie, tubes and bags hanging around the women. She ran to her proclaiming her love for the wounded woman.

“Alizee, je vous ai manqués tellement!” she declared. Alizee just smiled at her and touched her cheek. The two of them held each other for a long moment then Trystine finally asked “Puis-je me vous appeler la maman ? Je pense à vous comme cela et veux que nous soyons une famille.”
(Translation: Alizee, I missed you so much!)
(Translation: Can I call you my mom? I think of you as such and want us to be a family.)

Alizee gently pulled her head forward and kissed Trystine on the top of her head and replied “Vous serez toujours mon peu un et vous me voulez dire plus que le monde.”
(Translation: you will always be my little one, and you mean more than the world to me.)

Alizee looked at Dave and he just smiled at the scene before him. It made him feel good that these two could be reunited. She reached out to his offering her hand. He grasped it firmly and she returned the sincerity in their hand shake.

Dave stood there for a moment admiring the both of them. Admired them for what they were to each other. Two souls lost in a world of warped and twisted morals, where man betrayed one another for the sake of personal gain. A world where the love of family was over shadowed by personal greed and these two people managed to survive beyond all that and find each other and to create something magical of their own. He let go of her hand then, nodded to her and exited the room.

While walking down the hall, Dave reached for his cell phone and dialed a number. He was contacted by the local police when he’d gotten her to the hospital and they wanted a statement from him. When he got to the station, one of the detectives didn’t want a statement at all, just wanted an opinion of her mental state and physical health. So he’d told them all that he’d seen, which wasn’t much, he did mention to them that Trystine had been there the whole time. At first Trystine was scared to say anything but Dave managed to convince her that those people were the good guys. They got the whole story from Trystine and he was assured that she would not be charged for anything that she had. It was clearly an act of self defense. When the homicide detectives left the room and other detective came in from the Ministry of the Interior. This “Detective” was not from the normal police force, but from somewhere higher up. This detective expressed his interest in Dave’s opinion of the wounded girls, physical and mental health. Dave gave the man his honest opinion on the matter and assured the detective that she was not some homicidal killer. What Dave didn’t know though was that the beautiful woman was responsible for the deaths of almost all of the members of a covert CIA team whose mission was to make the will of its director come to fruition.

In the end, Dave vouched for the two girls’ need for each other. The Police and the Interior allowed Trystine and Alizee the freedom of family. So when Dave made his phone call to the Detective informing him that all was well with the two of them, he unwillingly told him that the secret of her father’s work was again secured.

fallenONE
29th August 2005, 17:41
Bumped this up because this is a great story! :lol:

Good job Quentin

Greenie
30th August 2005, 11:59
I DUNNO WHO WANTS TO READ IT! no offense I'm too lazy sorry

fallenONE
30th August 2005, 18:56
Well If you are ever need something to soak up time.......IT is just like a book or more like a short story

Ned
30th August 2005, 20:50
Quentin said no posting here, that's why he created another thread dedicated to discussion for this topics content: http://www.alizee-forum.com/topic,11139,-the-hunter-and-the-girl---comments-thread.html

eric
30th August 2005, 21:39
Ill read it l8r...

Tomorrow i got lots of time :)

fallenONE
30th August 2005, 22:02
Quentin said no posting here, that's why he created another thread dedicated to discussion for this topics content: http://www.alizee-forum.com/topic,11139,-the-hunter-and-the-girl---comments-thread.html

Since the mods wont make it a sticky, It would have been buried in the old posts had I not posted here and bumped this up....wanna to spread this story especially to the ppl that just registered..who knows...maybe they will like it

Alw
30th August 2005, 22:27
may i copy it if ever get a paper assignment that suits what u wrote? :roll:

SjanTeN
30th August 2005, 23:50
Has anyone actually read it, is it worth printing and reading?

Quentin
31st August 2005, 00:15
may i copy it if ever get a paper assignment that suits what u wrote? :roll:

That's Copywrite infringement Alw. You would need my concent. And now that the story is finished, there is no harm in posting in here. I just didn't want a bunch of posts in between the posts I made while writing it.

Anyways, If you want to read it go ahead. if not. Thats fine too.

fallenONE
31st August 2005, 02:28
Has anyone actually read it, is it worth printing and reading?

I thought it was great.....but stories and books like games and music depend on personal preference....So why dont you give it a try :D

I mean if u print it, its only gonna be black ink ... nothing fancy that would soak up ink

I read it on the comp screen :cheesy: