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Joseph
25th June 2004, 13:51
I put my feelings as a fan down on my computer and then I realized- Were all in this together. Here is what I have so far, I want you all to add something and I'll decide what to add to it;

KEEP IN MIND: I have a Flow going. The first letter of the left Part of the Stanza Spells out Alizée, so eventually it will say something. The last letters, I've made to spell out something, read the Italics from the top to the bottom.^^) Thank you all!


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Z3R0
25th June 2004, 22:24
i've posted this before here's my poem i wrote in english class a while back in may.

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/3523/Poem.jpg

DavidAlizée
25th June 2004, 23:08
good poems both of you.. Z3R0 .. maybee you should try and put her name in that poem somwhere :)

AlizéeInMYHeart
25th June 2004, 23:30
yeah good poems guys


you'll find some of mine in that poem topic :roll:

Petsku1
28th June 2004, 11:51
yea working on new ones... two of mine in that earlier poem thread =)

jon
29th June 2004, 08:51
Morning dew has a way of reminding me
that every day brings a new light.
A light from across oceans
that peirces my inner being once it crosses the horizons of my soul.

The sound of rain falling on the evergreens has a way of telling me
that there is a renewed freshness to life when I look upon you.
Those eyes make me melt, and that hair that makes my heart freeze with warmth;
make me realize what fortune brings me as walk another day on the Earth.

The aroma that emmanates from a rainbow has a way of hinting to me
my admiration for your every act.
Your stride is intoxicating, your smile precious , your words priceless.
Every minute of your voice is sustanance to yearning arms.

You will never lack radience.
You will always be loved.

You may use this if you want, Joseph. It is not heartfelt but is nevertheless a poem for your cause. Do not assosiate my name with it if you send it to her because it will make me feel guilty. On second thought, anyone may claim this poem as their own if they like it. I cannot tell if it is good or corny because it was written to make a poem, not to express my love. You can be the judge of that. :wink:

DavidAlizée
3rd July 2004, 00:24
mmm, a small one for Alizée

My dear alizée the one i so love
You give me pleasure, warmness and a deep meaning of love
when ever i hear you sing ACC
I fall into paraside with no need to see
this troubled world around me with lots of war
you are an angel to me, i totaly adore


When i hear your voice, and see you on stage
my heart beats fast in an amazing rage..
I know you will never get to read this i wrote
but in my heart i know, which i will now quote
my dear alizée you will always be
in my heart, forever... you and me

DavidAlizée :P